I found the process of writing the first draft of my paper very satisfying. There is such a sense of accomplishment in combining all of my research into a paper and to write that many pages. Although it is far from polished, I have a good start and am excited to edit it. I am uncertain of how well I connected each paragraph to each other and to my overall argument, so when revising, I am going to pay particular attention to that. Furthermore, towards the end of the paper I think I ramble a little and repeat myself, so the goal is to refine that section specifically and figure out how to link each paragraph, yet keep the points different. Overall, I am proud of how my first draft turned out and where it is headed.