The process of revisions has been difficult. I have received great feedback from Dr. Shermer, Ruby, and Laura, but it is tough to incorporate all of the notes. My main issue has been re-organizing my paper. Ideally reworking the paper will make it more clear to read and comprehend, but it is easy to get lost in the paragraphs and be uncertain whether I am actually clarifying my argument. That aspect has been frustrating, but overall it has been very beneficial in improving my writing skills to rewrite my paper numerous times. This week I am focusing on organizing my main points, providing further analysis, and strengthening the language of my paper. Furthermore, I am going to pay attention to continuing my argument throughout the paper.